Flirting with Clouds

Written long ago on a lazy summer's afternoon when I had nothing better to do than flirt with clouds. Gosh I miss those days!

Flirting with Clouds

by Erin L George

 

A lacy cloud passes overhead

flirting waltz for me

weaving in and out of sun

as mellow as could be.

 

I wink back. Pulling down bikini

straps, rolling over

I settle into weeds - tall,

reaching to tickle the lady up above.

 

For moment's sake, I stop

as I spot a ghostly dancer

overhead and teasing me -

tossing kisses down with glee.

Reviews

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

There is indeed something so tranquil about clouds,any words weaved around them would be just as beautiful.

[nostal]

Sweet, poem that gives off a calm sense and a warm feeling.
Nice job.

[Tina Kline]

This is a fun, flirty sort of poem and I really found it enjoyable. Nice job.

[Emily B]

flirting with clouds and stars and stray butterflies . . . this is lovely and fun