Life

Life

A Poem by Freedomwriter
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A poem about life and living it.

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A cup of coffee in the morning,
a boss's angry stern warming, 
a beeping horn, 
a laughing child,
Someone in this world that makes you smile.
Does this matter all this material?
these paper cups and rotting wood.
when you lie with your last breath coming near 
and you look back on all these years, 
what do you find that you have done 
will you find that you have won?
 Does the money serve you as you lay alone? 
In your empty bed you lay and groan
No one knows you 
there is no one to care
so you lay there in despair.
 your house 
your life 
what does it mean 
 if everything in the end was filled with greed?
 you think to your office with all your workers 
you never let her get off early
what if she missed her little son's first steps
what does it mean? 
Nothing that matters lasts forever.
though you think yourself clever,
 you cannot escape 
the fate.
that we will all come to one day
where you lay 
on your bed and breathe your last
breathe,
but you can control who hears 
your stories throughout the years
you can decide 
which you want , love ... or pride

© 2011 Freedomwriter


Author's Note

Freedomwriter
NOTE PUNCTUATION. MAKES A DIFFERENCE IF YOU DO/ DON'T thanks

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Awesome write, I like this there is alot said in this piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


well written, its great how you capture the essence of what someone might have to go through, definitely something to think about. keep writing though, there's a lot of potential in your words

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Freedomwriter
Freedomwriter

New Haven, CT



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