"The Fear of Falling"

"The Fear of Falling"

A Poem by Thepensiveplayer
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A supporting hand goes a long way.

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"You won't fall because I'll catch you"

"I know your going through a tough trial"
"but I'll be behind you all the while"
"If your struggling to find your place"
"then I'll provide you a safe space"

"You won't fall because I'll catch you"

"Its time to put your plans in motion"
"because I want you to feel euphoric emotions"
"Don't think of the chance you won't succeed"
"but instead the day when you complete the deed"

"You won't fall because I'll catch you"

"We all come across mishaps"
"but that's no reason to feel like crap"
"because you've been in my life so long"
"I want to keep you as family where you belong"

"You won't fall because I'll catch you"



© 2017 Thepensiveplayer



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"We all come across mishaps"
"but that's no reason to feel like crap"
"because you've been in my life so long"
"I want to keep you as family where you belong"

Love this part the most,
This is really good. Once again awesome flow and rhyme scheme. you are very talented.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Nice theme, Corey. Full of authenticity and passion. You convey sincerity exceptionally well. I look forward to reading more.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thepensiveplayer

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you very much for the warm review and I'll definitely keep going.

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Added on December 25, 2017
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Thepensiveplayer
Thepensiveplayer

Harvey, LA



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My name is Corey Johnson and I enjoy writing poems to apply growth to myself. I've always wondered," what constitutes a good life in this world?" "Should a person conform to society's expectations or .. more..

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