"The Positive Cold"

"The Positive Cold"

A Poem by Thepensiveplayer
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The warmest soul on a chilly night

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"My good outlook on life can seem contagious"
"even some people find me outrageous"
"Yet, I manage to draw them near"
"because I inspire them with a cheer"

"After my trials, I feel so alive"
"Now I wanna see everyone else thrive"
"Understand that your apart of my goal"
"because I want to keep your life whole"

"Consider me a kind stranger"
"that intends to be a game-changer"
"Maybe one day we'll meet"
"and you'll tell me your story while we eat"



© 2018 Thepensiveplayer



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I loved it so much really made me smile

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You always have hope threaded between your words, Corey. This poem is so nicely written. Great job!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A pleasant, uplifting gesture in poetic form. I particularly admire the humility and sincerity you express in his poem. I can imagine, after reading the end, you and a new friend chatting in a diner, lifting each other up. Nice work, sir.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I TOTALLY love this write , This is so good.
So well written and expressful. Very nicely done.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Thepensiveplayer
Thepensiveplayer

Harvey, LA



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My name is Corey Johnson and I enjoy writing poems to apply growth to myself. I've always wondered," what constitutes a good life in this world?" "Should a person conform to society's expectations or .. more..

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