Dominic

This poem is about my youngest brother. I love him very much. And I hope he will grow up to be a good person.

There was a smart boy named Dominic.

He can be dominate 

when he feels like it.

He don't like to quit

He hoped one day he can be prominent. 

Author's Note

Help me with what I can fix. And i hope you enjoy all my poem of my siblings. Auster, Star, Orchid and Dominic.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed this poem. Dominic reminded me of my grandson. Hard-headed and very smart. I liked the complete poem and the hopeful ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Fairy]

Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.