Road trip from Love to Heaven

a poem about a girl dreaming of her future with the boy she loves..:)

Once I had been to the pond of love

Dabbling and smoothing, 

My angels soft wings

Come from yonder, far above

He was my shining star

Come to save me on a dark night 

From the torment and pain

In an ostentatious little car

And that day shall not be very far

When we shall live in our sweet little world

Love and passion curled

When the morning rays will flow through

And I would wake you with my fresh morning dew

Wake you up on a bright new day

Give you a kiss before you go to work

Hoping you come without any more delay

I will dress up and put on a huge bright smile

I will cook for you and wait a while

Every day will be worthwhile

We are to be couples for life long

I promise to keep you smiling and happy

Till my breath leaves, my body and is gone

You can be strong, listen to our song

Till we unite again and move on

To the palace in paradise where we belong…..

Author's Note

Let me know how you felt...Thankyou..:)

Reviews

[Belinda]

This is beautiful, like always.

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:)

[Ahmad Cox]

Very beautiful

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:D

[Soul Fire]

Beautiful...relatable..good work,

[Cerise]

Thankyou so much....:D

[Soul Fire]

You;re welcome

[MOON]

affirming lovely write.

[Cerise]

Awww..Thankyou..:D

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

This feels so jubilant! I can almost hear somebody saying this aloud for their love to hear. *claps* Props to you!

[Cerise]

Aww...Thankyou so mcuh fro wonderful words..:D

[emmy bon]

very interesting writing, the rhymes is much yet sound nice little editing will help.
well done ma'am

[Cerise]

Thankyou so much..:D

[sierrasparks91]

very good it made me feel like i was actually in the poem.

[Cerise]

Thankyou so much..:D

[sierrasparks91]

welcome :)

[Dayran]

The way you linger in the service of love reminds a person of the times when he may have been in the company of love. In the same way that some people may have hurried from it is the same way we return to it today..... a little bashful, guilt laden but hopeful.

[Cerise]

Thankyou for your wonderful words..:D

[Cynthia Man]

I love it really much, it's sweet and I like the rhymes as well, but I have never read much rhyme poems, haha... I can feel love through this poem and that it touches me a lot! All those dreams, people around me think of them, what to do when fall in love.... I think a lot of people can relate to it! :)) NIce written!

[Cerise]

ahahhaha...:P..Thankyou missy...your words were as motivational as ever...:P