Tears
A Poem by Arik
Emotions pour forth A river flows from my heart Helpless to contain
© 2012 Arik
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I hesitate to leave a long review of such a poignant piece. That feeling of water just flowing from your chest, up your throat and out your eyes is so beautifully captured here. The matching beat on the first and third lines makes it seem completely contained, concluded, whole, even though the poem is not more than 12 words.
Thank you. Touched my heart.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you that means a lot.
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I hesitate to leave a long review of such a poignant piece. That feeling of water just flowing from your chest, up your throat and out your eyes is so beautifully captured here. The matching beat on the first and third lines makes it seem completely contained, concluded, whole, even though the poem is not more than 12 words.
Thank you. Touched my heart.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you that means a lot.
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Added on July 4, 2012
Last Updated on July 4, 2012
Tags: tears, sad, emotion
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ArikApple Valley, CA
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I am a nineteen year old student living in Apple Valley, CA. I love a good story, it doesn't matter if it's a TV show, movie, short story, comic, poem, novel, video game, etc. As long as a story is go.. more..
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