Two to One

 

alone in quick time, incomplete, only I

filling space with empty places for me

narrow eyes failing tears that two may cry

drawn into natures he and she to we

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plural to dual to one source of sight

rainbows, rocky rut or feast and flowers

entwined by seasons both bitter or light

years run away, melting quick like hours

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words unneeded as both spirits combine

taste, sorrow and pain impress or impair

complete acceptance more in age decline

fulfilled first promise each kindness declare

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all in, risks every dear treasure of heart

transferred unto both, gifts we each impart

Reviews

[Mark]

There are many here who use the word "sonnet", but obviously have no idea what the word means. What a thrill it is to find a writer who is not only familiar with the form, but is a master of it as well. Please send me a friend invite, so that I will not forget to go to your page and read more of you! (I too am enamored of the Olde Forms, and we are an endangered species!)

[James Paulin]

Thank you Mark, however, I haven't written many sonnets and though I studied the form, I'll just say I was lucky this one came out so well.

[Sheila Kline]

A lovely poem of love indeed!! Congratulations on your win in the Blue Rose Cafe's Valentine's Day contest!!!!

[James Paulin]

Thank you Sheila. I am happy you enjoyed it.

[Helena]

Oh what a beautiful, romantic sonnet to feast my eyes on today. A classic one if ever there was. Just stunning!! Thank you for joining in my contest Jim and Happy Valentine's Day!

~ Helena ~