Wind Chill

Wind Chill

A Poem by James Paulin
"

Winter rages

"

blasts scream, buffet, blow

as bitter cold whips exposed.

raw flesh smarts till numb


© 2010 James Paulin



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Yes, and I've met some women like that, too...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is a perfect Haiku. Almost suicide (as it shall be)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Powerful in its brevity

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Oooooh, I can feel it stinging my flesh right now!! These winter blasts indeed may chill us to the bone!
You have expressed the bitter truth of "Old Man Winter" in few words....well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes, I think that about describes this current season. I am always amazed at how you are able to paint a big picture with just a few words. Talent my friend, pure talent..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

interesting haiku, gives me the chill :)
thanks for inviting me to read this, and for the award :)
(L)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Added on January 10, 2010
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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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