Sky Dance

Sky Dance

A Poem by James Paulin
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Ballet poem

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Tip toe

Leap, fly, soar and spin

Effortless grace in unison

Discipline

Ballet wakes an artist within

Float round and about again

Bravo!

© 2010 James Paulin


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This is great! As a ballet dancer, I can say that this definitely captures the essence of dance. Love it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Short but i really like it...it's great.

Nae-Nae...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Congrats on your great cameo. Wonderful!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Congratulations for winning the cameo contest!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent use of rhythm, created by the perfect choice of words.
Bravo.
ATB
Alex.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Absolutley wonderful! Reading this made me feel as if i was the one on tip toes....
Beautiful!!:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thats actually LOVELY! Nice way to put ballet.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

tip toe is cliché but I like the power of this poem. It makes me alive. Truly, I thought, why should I be sad today just because my fiancé is 8 000 km away?

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent

Posted 14 Years Ago



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James Paulin
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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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