Afternoon tea

Afternoon tea

A Poem by James Paulin

 

roses

pink,  lemon, white chiffon

 

china

fine Belleek parian, delicately thin

 

linen

Irish tea cloth, lace border upon

 

tea

loose,  black, bergamot within

 

scones

thimbleberry jam, marmalade

 

attire

impeccably reserved

 

pearls

matched in color and grade

 

etiquette

genteelly observed 

 

© 2010 James Paulin


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You've really capture the Afternoon Tea scene masterfully. The richness of your imagery and economy of your words is superb.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounds wonderful with an impeccable setting :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


classic english afternoon tea. genteelly written :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


lol, so dainty! :D love the formatting too btw, it's so 'proper' and reflects well on what the poem is talking about... i've never heard of thimbleberry jam before, but it sounds scrumptious!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mmm... this makes me want to sit down with a cup of tea and finger sandwiches. Nice write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And when is tea time? She asked with her small pinky in the air and her Easter bonnet smartly fastened under her chin :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

challenges come in all the shades of red

Posted 14 Years Ago



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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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