BALLET OF EMOTION

BALLET OF EMOTION

A Poem by FlawedByDesign

BALLET OF EMOTION

Lace your shoes and
pull up little ballerina,
come pirouette on
the pink florets.


Let your feet grace
the sun-kissed petals,
as you dance on
the illusions of flight.


Your movements
in adagio, exquisite -
stirring my feelings
to heavenly chimes.


The ballet of emotion
in my eyes, skipping,
twisting and turning
to your every brisé.


My heart palpitating
to the unsung symphony,
upon which you spread
your wings...my graceful angel.


© 2010 FlawedByDesign



Author's Note

FlawedByDesign
This is written based on the display picture and for Cheyenne's contest found here,
http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Beautify-Me/11488/
***Winner of the said contest.

Normally I don't draw words from pictures (I don't consider myself good at it), but I made an exception in this case :)

Thank you for the feedback should you leave it.

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precision and solid consistancy you've pulled out all the stops to make this
poem the best it can be, the words are alive, and never settle for less.
you like to write in double couplets i say double because you ephasize the
line breaks with your punctuation perfectly at every second line in each

stanza, its the little things tha make good writing stand out in big ways, like perfect punctuation and speaking general on forms
which this form is usually a rhyme form, but you take it to another level,
push the envelope, is excatly what poetry needs nowadays

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This brings back good memories of the girlhood dream of becoming a ballerina. I'd love to dance on "the illusion of flight" I liked this poem alot it inspires me to add more poignancy to my own writing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


This reminds me of my days in ballet. This poem is beautiful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


such and interesting read, i really enjoy your style of rythme in this poem, and the words perfect for the tone of the picture. simple and beautiful

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love the title... this flowed with such grace and eloquence...wonderful images...a beautiful write..

Posted 7 Years Ago


precision and solid consistancy you've pulled out all the stops to make this
poem the best it can be, the words are alive, and never settle for less.
you like to write in double couplets i say double because you ephasize the
line breaks with your punctuation perfectly at every second line in each

stanza, its the little things tha make good writing stand out in big ways, like perfect punctuation and speaking general on forms
which this form is usually a rhyme form, but you take it to another level,
push the envelope, is excatly what poetry needs nowadays

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

soft and beautiful.. you carry that elegant lilt so skilfully, and painted a watercolour of tender words here..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was written as gracefully as the subject matter it represents. It was definitely deserving of the recognition my man. Very different write for you, but it worked. Nice work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love watching a woman with skill dancing with power l and strength. The poem description open the door to a very good vision of beauty and emotions. The words in the poem made this a pleasure to read. A outstanding poem.
"My heart palpitating
to the unsung symphony,"
Coyote




Posted 7 Years Ago


I marvel at ballet...how people can seem so weightless...how they seem to defy gravity and leap so high...such grace makes us dream...as does your poem here...
Wonderfully written...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Beautiful!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Stratford, Ontario, Canada



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