This is written based on the display picture and for Cheyenne's contest found here,
http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Beautify-Me/11488/
***Winner of the said contest.
Normally I don't draw words from pictures (I don't consider myself good at it), but I made an exception in this case :)
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precision and solid consistancy you've pulled out all the stops to make this
poem the best it can be, the words are alive, and never settle for less.
you like to write in double couplets i say double because you ephasize the
line breaks with your punctuation perfectly at every second line in each
stanza, its the little things tha make good writing stand out in big ways, like perfect punctuation and speaking general on forms
which this form is usually a rhyme form, but you take it to another level,
push the envelope, is excatly what poetry needs nowadays
This brings back good memories of the girlhood dream of becoming a ballerina. I'd love to dance on "the illusion of flight" I liked this poem alot it inspires me to add more poignancy to my own writing.
precision and solid consistancy you've pulled out all the stops to make this
poem the best it can be, the words are alive, and never settle for less.
you like to write in double couplets i say double because you ephasize the
line breaks with your punctuation perfectly at every second line in each
stanza, its the little things tha make good writing stand out in big ways, like perfect punctuation and speaking general on forms
which this form is usually a rhyme form, but you take it to another level,
push the envelope, is excatly what poetry needs nowadays
This was written as gracefully as the subject matter it represents. It was definitely deserving of the recognition my man. Very different write for you, but it worked. Nice work.
I love watching a woman with skill dancing with power l and strength. The poem description open the door to a very good vision of beauty and emotions. The words in the poem made this a pleasure to read. A outstanding poem.
"My heart palpitating
to the unsung symphony,"
Coyote
I marvel at ballet...how people can seem so weightless...how they seem to defy gravity and leap so high...such grace makes us dream...as does your poem here...
Wonderfully written...
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