First Love

First Love

A Poem by gabi123
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A tale of my first(and still only) love.

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She was a flower

Fragile with the sun


I saw her like the sun

Beautiful like the sunrise


I looked into her eyes

And saw the colorful winds

The happy little trees

The big basking moon

Of her soul


Insecurities

Acting up


Did not know

The ethics

Or morals


I just wanted to bask

In her sunshine


Nobody cares somehow

When the wasted love

Comes pouring down in a storm


Can’t you see what you have done

With my soul


When you said

No



© 2017 gabi123



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gabi123
Well guys, what do you think? Deep enough? Please comment!

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Definitely a good read, deeply emotional, and feels sincere. Keep up the good work!

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on April 7, 2016
Last Updated on March 13, 2017
Tags: romance, sadness, broken heart

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gabi123
gabi123

Chappaqua, NY



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