I will be loved again

I will be loved again

A Poem by Lydia Waldock
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I've been single for almost a year and some days its hard to know if I will be loved again by someone special but I know I will

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I will be loved again 
I will love and love again 
Heartbreaks sure do ache 
But I am able to be loved 
Sunflowers will bloom in my brown eyes 
Warm bodies entangled together 
I will be held 
I will be wanted 

I will love 
I will hold hand in hand with hearts of gold 
In distant moments I can feel those emotions burble over top 
Sunny Sunday morning breakfasts are in our time 
Laughter and dimple shared smiles 

For now, I feel alone 
In my dark days, I will still love either it is myself or those around 
Even in the moments of despair 
In my feelings of unloveable 
I know that in my infatuation of self-hatred and pain 

I will be loved again 

© 2018 Lydia Waldock


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This one has the feeling of self reassurance in the midst of a dry season. It is as though the speaker is telling herself repeatedly that she will be loved again in a effort to hold the fortress against the negative feelings that are besieging it. This is really good strategy. When the self defeating voices are allowed a forum they can easily take the wheel and steer the ship aground. The poem contains a lot of colorful, positive imagery, which, if dwelt upon frequently enough, can be a veritable anti-depressant. The only thing better than reading such words is writing more of them. Do that.

PS: In the third line from the end, consider inserting "being" in front of "unloveable."

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lydia Waldock

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your comment!! Lots of good insight and I'll make that change!
your poetry is so beautiful , almost make me to cry , hardly ever touched like that by reading poetry

You wish to be loved , so simple wish and so much of your life you just entered into few lines , you are brave , looking inside you and find what you really want, finally you reached the understanding , you will be loved again , you will feel that so beautiful feelings again.

You are relaxed and smile to yourself ,

Your words are truly beautiful and honest

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lydia Waldock

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :) Im glad you enjoyed
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You are so young with so many years ahead of you. Enjoy being a young adult, be silly, do daft things, you have many, many years in which to be loved. No need to rush at it :))

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lydia Waldock

5 Years Ago

Oh totally!!! I know but it would be lovely to be in love and loved again! Thanks for your comment! .. read more

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Added on December 10, 2018
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Tags: poem, love, art, hope, relationships, moody, feelings

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Lydia Waldock
Lydia Waldock

British Columbia, Canada



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21 year old lover of poetry even bigger lover of writing poetry some trash some gold. life's tough might as well make some art more..

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