Hold me in Your Arms

Hold me in Your Arms

A Poem by lavina k.
"

I love you

"

Closeness of love can be seen

Through our hearts

Trueness of love can be shown

Through our eyes

 Gentleness of love can be drawn

Through our touch

 

Darling,

Hold me in your Arms

To hear the whispers of your heart

To see the restlessness in your eyes

To feel the pragmatism of your touch

 

My love for you is too strong

Which I'm holding for so long

Things you see has been changed

For you which never laid

 

I just want your love

Hold me like a dove

Show the tenderness

Of your heart

Loving me like

Caring your heart.


© 2010 lavina k.



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lavina k.
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This ideal for of love…
Each heart longs for a love like this…
Feel so happy to read a poem like this….
Thanks for sharing…


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a wonderful and lovely write. I enjoyed this

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Another good write here. Excellent flow and rhyme scheme. Caring and loving feel good stuff. :) IMO drop the last two lines.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really liked this, I can visualize every bit.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Touching and gentle, well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aww...im touched..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The gentle and kindness of hug and arms to keep you safe. Are the things we need to be human. The poem is beautiful. When you think with your heart. The world can be a better place. Love and kindness is never forgotten. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This poem definitely said how much you love and need this person in a beautiful way. I love the picture that you picked, too. I treminds me of how innocent and simple love can be at the beginning..... Wondeful poem, as always, from you!!! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

expression of words are good...not very well written...i think you can add something different in this .otherwise nice work:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very touching and seemed very genuine
from the heart...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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lavina k.
lavina k.

jaipur, India



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