An Exact Truth

Maybe a little too exact

Love iris light waves                       

Four hundred seventy five

                            Nanometres length

Author's Note

A haiku expressing a powerful fact about myself in a somewhat riddling way.
Thoughts?
:)

Reviews

[Mai L Nissen]

Eyes...
you like looking things that appear to be blue?

[gorillarock]

I'm a real sucker for blue eyes! I'd pretty much do anything for a blue eyed bat of the eyelashes haha

[Mai L Nissen]

Haha, really? Many people have 'weakness' like that :) Hm, wonder what mine is...?

[gorillarock]

excessive back hair? yeah blue eyes, tallness, full body, and long hair all melt my mind and cause me to gravitate toward the person who has those features... it's my instinctive attractions I think haha

[Mai L Nissen]

Haha, yeah and the hair has to be really long! perhaps a back full of little dreadlocks :)
read moreHaha, yeah and the hair has to be really long! perhaps a back full of little dreadlocks :)

Nah... Actually I have a tendency to melt when looking into a pair of relatively big eyes with eyelashes that are placed regularly across the lids - unless something really stupid comes out of the mouth belonging to those eyes... (FYI: my eyelashes are pathetic and random, my eyes are tiny slids and I say really stupid things all the time) :D

[Mai L Nissen]

I tend to fall for eyes, relatively big, with lashes that are placed regularly across the lids and a certain look in the eyes... unless something really stupid comes out the mouth belonging to that pair of eyes :D
Interestingly, I have tiny little slids for eyes, pathetic and randomly placed eyelashes, stupid things come out of mouth on regular basis...

[gorillarock]

dreads are a lot of work, I'd like to see how monkey-like the picture would be that has one person tending the back dreads of another... and if they find cumbs and eat... lol I'd die a happy man! I have the eyes of my own affection, sadly! blue, bright, and dynamically intense... when I really look in the mirror I can convince myself to do some pretty dumb things... but this poem wasn't written about my own lol it has another person as its inspiration. yep... pretty dumb things indeed...
as for your interesting point, they say that opposites attract :P

[Mai L Nissen]

Haha :) that would be nasty!

Why 'sadly' - you like blue eyes!
Yeah, I probably shouldn't ask about the things you can convince yourself about in front of the mirror... lol (never thought I would in all sincerity write 'lol' ).

The person of inspiration, is that person still in your life?

[gorillarock]

"Sad" only because of the dumb things that happen when I vainly and admiringly gaze deep into my own blue eyed soul! Wearing bold and silly clothes, spending too much on beers for women, taking photos that should never be taken, etc. Ill leave out some of the worst ideas haha

The eyes that inspired this little poem are still in my life in a positive way. She comes and goes, but those blues are forever O.O

haha I'm glad you had the chance to literally "lol"! those can be few and far between heh

[Mai L Nissen]

wow! haha...

Glad that they are in your life in a positive way :)