Me

 

Joining into this world

Of pain and beauty

Entering with hope and dreams

Yet growing and learning

What was the point

If I was to have a hard life of pain

Let me end my life

Let me live my life

I will do it my way

Anxiety building up

Meeting my love so pure

Joining the world anew

Of love I know

How you may ask

Not doubting myself

So this is how

Of this I am sure

Now my life is complete

Reviews

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

This is a great poem =)

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

this has an amazing flow, such an amazing write... nicely done

[Jonathan Bryant Dean]

This is one of the best long verse acrostics that I have seen on the Cafe. None of the lines are left bare, there is meat on the bones, so to speak. There is even a constant rythm, which is a bonus.

Thank you for sending me a read request for this poem.

Well done.

JBD