Words, Silence & Life ...

Words, Silence & Life ...

A Poem by Hamza
"

ever felt like we could have said something more .. something better .. something that we forgot to mention when we had the opportunity ... sigh yes, we all have felt it ..

"
falling short of words is but natural .. 
when we wish to express the needful ... 

the beauty isn't in expressing it .. 
it lies in the "silent mode" that prevails...

for, the ones the words are meant for .. 
should come to know themselves what they are... 



© 2012 Hamza



Author's Note

Hamza
sometimes we feel we shouldn't say it .. the way we feel. and expect them to understand by themselves.. but when the opportunity is done, gone ... we regret that we could have said something more .. isn't it ..
sigh ..

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This is beautiful, and it really made me think. When you care so much about someone that you just want to pour your feelings out to them, it seems to be when you're at a loss for words, simply because they're that striking to you. I've felt that, and for that reason, I really relate to this. Beautifully written, and a wonderful topic. I hope you find the worlds. x

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

4 Years Ago

hope i do and hope everybody does :)



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Really beautiful. simple and nice. :))

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ah! Lines like this is the sole reason why I read and write.
They make you go aweee and you get that tightening in your heart because you feel exactly what the words are saying

Posted 4 Years Ago


GrEat lines .. that is so true!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Beautifully expressed often we leave thing unsaid much to our regret.

Posted 4 Years Ago


"should come to know themselves what they are... " is there a word missing between "themselves" and "what"?

I like the thoughts this one brings to mind.

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is very beautiful, very thought-provoking

Posted 4 Years Ago


Hamza

4 Years Ago

Thank you :)
You're a very interesting and thoughtful writer with an emotional depth that one can't expect for your age. I love that - short, succint and to the point wiothout being sharp or cold. Very well done :-)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

4 Years Ago

well, it's all about being good, no matter what the circumstance ..
being cold or aggressive .. read more
KarinaT

4 Years Ago

It's something that becomes easier with time I have found. it's becomes a habit and a moral choice t.. read more
Hamza

4 Years Ago

:) thank you
very beautifully done :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

4 Years Ago

thank you :)
Beautiful! For a moment it was hurting to see how beauty lies in the silent mode but then i got your view!!( I hope i did) :P

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

4 Years Ago

(hope you did) .. :)
and thank you once again ..
beautiful:):) and so true

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

4 Years Ago

thank you :)

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Added on October 25, 2012
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Tags: words, silence, life, natural, express, love.

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Hamza
Hamza

Jammu, Jammu & kashmir, India



About
Hamza .. that's me .. An Engineer by profession and a writer by Emotion ... I am 26... I am no different, I am not special .. I'm just a different face, and a few different fingerprints .. I am.. more..

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