The Final Confession

The Final Confession

A Poem by hardik

My heart's beating very fast
I dunno which beat will be my last
As I lie here waiting to die
I realize I never got to say bye

Farewell my dear beloved
Always smile and don't be sad
Although I know that you wont be
You've never loved me you see

I remember when I first saw you
You were standing ahead of me in a queue
Both waiting for our respective turns
Both our minds filled with concerns

I had felt something that day
I recall that now when on my deathbed I lay
It was minute but now I feel it
My heart had for first time skipped a beat

Remembering your smile brings me peace
My heart rate begins to ease
Now your memory brings tears to my eyes
All this is true no lies

These are tears of joy not pain
Soon in a coffin I'll be lain
A last farewell is what I seek
A smile of yours however meek

I dunno what happens after death
But I'm sure as I take my last breath
If I could have one look at your face
Eternal peace is what I will embrace

© 2013 hardik



Author's Note

hardik
Please tell me how it is. It is my first effort.

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Great poem about a love that was lost somewhere somehow, this was great written, love the last stanza as you think about what comes after death hoping to find peace....anyway great job

Posted 4 Years Ago


hardik

4 Years Ago

Thank you so so much :-)
A lost love, but was it a true love, in your heart it seems it was, Nicely penned

Posted 4 Years Ago


hardik

4 Years Ago

Thank You :)

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Added on January 7, 2013
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hardik
hardik

Rajkot, India



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I am a medical student. I like to express my feelings in the form of poems more..

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