Sweet Taste Of Poetry

I open the can from its top,
trigger released at its best.

While hearing its poetic fizz
brew and bubble all over.

So with this I take me a
drink for my pleasure.

Hmm, for this is a well made
drink I must say,from its beginning
to it very end.

A quality flow of liquid poetry
at its best,leaving no
bad after taste.

Author's Note

Was just inspired from opening me a can of Pepsi just now and added a little creative thinking. Tell me what you think

Reviews

[luviva]

wow, well a can of pepsi is a real inspiration coz this was a real worth reading poem.
The idea is just so predictable but the way you curved it..
just give credits to you!!
loved it mostly the last paragraph...
i agree with you about the bad test bit.

[kelvin]

Thank you very much for you kind words here my friend i appreciate it Happy New Year to you

[luviva]

happy new year.....

[kelvin]

thank you

[Babe Roxx]

Inspiration to write comes in many form...I like that, to create from that inspiration.

[kelvin]

thank you for your thoughts here

[Babe Roxx]

You're welcome, Kelvin.

[Sami Khalil]

The brilliance in this poem is how you were inspired by a small object and how you compared it to the flow of pleasure from beginning to end. This is truly a quality of liquid poetry and I like that word by the way...Thank you for sharing...

[kelvin]

Thank you oh so much for your thoughts and wise outlook here i appreciated it fellow writer and friend.

[Sami Khalil]

You are always welcome...

[Marie]

I think you make Pepsi sound better than it is...for I prefer ginger ale myself...

[kelvin]

Hahaha maybe so but at the time that's what I was drinking hahaha thanks for your thoughts Happy New Year to you

[DIVYA]

Loved the comparison to a trigger! The fizz was just right to put me in the mood. Need a drink and Now! loved this! :)

[kelvin]

Thank you very much hey glad it put you in the mood.

[DIVYA]

I better be...its almost New Years Eve here! ;)

[kelvin]

That's right hahaha I hope you are showtime haha

[DIVYA]

:)

[SparrowSong]

I don't drink a lot of Pepsi, but every now and again I get a craving. The sound of the pop of the tab and the fizzies to the taste of that first drink, it is like no other. I like how you described it :)

[kelvin]

Well thank you for your kind words i appreciate it very much