Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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Perspective

Perspective

A Poem by J. Oliver
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"The only difference between revolution and rebellion is whose perspective you are using."

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The only difference
between "revolution"
and "rebellion"
is whose perspective you are using.
Perhaps you are the young visionary,
barely introduced to the world
and already telling it how it should change.
Your ideals could help a great many,
if only they were willing to be helped.
You have never held a gun before
and your hands are shaking,
but change so often sings for blood
you are old enough to know this,
at least.
The barrel of your weapon
is trained on a national guardsman,
who is also aiming at you.
Or is it your brother next to you?
He has always been there
like your shadow,
if your shadow had been born
three years before you,
and had much sadder eyes.
He tells himself,
your brother is trying to change the world,
but you are only trying to bring him home.
It was your mother's request
and you almost hate them both for it.
Almost.
You have always been the wise one
the protector, the guide,
offering a clap on the back
or a shoulder to cry on.
You are your mother's rock
and your father's favorite
and a revolutionary's brother.
Is it monstrous that you would trade it all
to be nothing but yourself?
Of course, it doesn't particularly matter,
this most likely won't end well for you.
You have never held a gun before
and although your hands are steady
a guardsman's sight is trained on your brother.
As despicable as it may be,
you hope someone cries for you,
their heart rent at memories of your face.
The barrel of your gun shifts
to aim at the man who intends to kill
the heart of the rebellion.
He has been trained to see
only what his brothers next to him see
but if he looked closer
he may be thinking,
The men across the way from you
could have lived on your street.
Perhaps you played together,
running races across the cracked pavement,
playing war under the summer sun.
if you shoot the boy across from you
(because god, he is just a boy)
will he get up again, laughing?
Does hoping he might
free you from the guilt of killing him?
You are all so young
but so full of intention,
and perhaps that is why
the firebrand youth never come home.
You are willing to die for what you believe,
but that does not negate the fear.
The to men across from you are brothers,
they have the same determined eyes.
They look at you and see an enemy,
you look at them and see yourself.
Both are aiming at you.
Only one will get to you first.
The other will most likely die
with regret on his lips,
and his brother by his side.
You hope you are aiming at the right one.
The only difference
between revolution and rebellion
is whose perspective you are using.
Perhaps you are the young visionary
or his brother,
or the national guardsman
who holds their fate in your hands.
Perhaps you are none of them
but you have already chosen your favorite.
You are holding your breath, waiting.
Who lives? Who dies?
In the end, it doesn't matter,
you don't even know their names.
What do their deaths matter?
It depends
on whose perspective
you are using.

© 2016 J. Oliver


Author's Note

J. Oliver
Feedback is welcome, I'm always looking to improve.

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A bit winded for what you are conveying. May want to shorten it a bit. Its a poem not a speech. But that's just my opinion. I may be wrong. Good philosophy tho.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Added on July 13, 2016
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