Bloody Love

 

Here darkness lurks

Behind the trees

Nothings left

But peace serenity

 

The moon is full

The stars are bright

The blood drips off

My lips tonight

 

Black petals lay at your feet

The ground turns colder as we speak

The wolves’ howls grow louder still

And as we lay here together beneath

Ide rather be six feet under without you

 

Bloody death, temptations its all

A joke, a hoax, a way to make us fall

Roses of black and winters fury

She bends away to kiss the wounded

And steals what is given

No trust just deceit

Love were demons never retreat

Is never fully complete

 

Ghost in the forests

Elixir of life

She knows no terror

But feeds on your fear

The blood is running

Temptation and sin

The joke wears thin

 

Bloody death, temptations its all

A joke, a hoax, a way to make us fall

Roses of black and winters fury

She bends away to kiss the wounded

And steals what is given

No trust just deceit

Love were demons never retreat

Is never fully complete

 

Author's Note

ANyone who can give me CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is welcome to leave comments, wants, ideas, etc.

Reviews

[Kimberly Smith]

nice very nice... i could feel this poem perfection..