The Single Rose

A love poem

a dozen from one

colored from another

but the one that caught my eye was the single rose

there was one blood red rose perfect in size

beautiful it was and not a leaf out of place

the small note said

I LOVE YOU

that was all but meant more than all of the others

the one rose from my love.

Reviews

[Ashley Myers]

Souless is very right. You ARE GOOD, i sent you a message from the forum you posted on the unsure authors page. It explains everything. I can see you write what you feel, you just have to learn how to put the words together, and all the other techinical stuff that just comes with time, experience, and maturity. dont take this as an insult it is FAR from it!!!!

[SOUL LESS]

The thought is awesome...excellent...your writing needs to mature. Trying using symbols (like the rose) in your poems. It gives it the poetical touch. You have the spirit of one: Your comment was very appropriate "stiffness". Perfect! I felt the same!

With age, im sure you'll mature into a fine poet. Keep writing! And send me read requests. I'll try my best to honour them.