I've Heard Them Say

I couldn't sleep so i made a poem... PLEASE READ & REVIEW :)

I've heard them say

Love is peaceful.

Love is kind.

True love truly never dies.

I tell you now that's all a lie.

I've heard them say

Life is good

Life's a blessing

Live your life or you'll regret it

I tell you now I've learned my lesson

Nothing brings peace

No one is kind

True love's not real

It always dies

Life is pain

A twisted curse

So end it now

It just gets worse

Author's Note

I'm grateful for any feedback

Reviews

[paddy d daly]

at times i might agree, at other times not, at times kindness can spring from the most unexpected place and yes hurt too can spring up and slap us in the face, all is not black and white...

[Holly]

I agree.. The world is full of gray area. Thank you so much for the review :)

[A Foiled Soul]

This really spoke to me in a way many people cannot. I feel that you and I have the view of things such as this. I'd greatly appreciate if you were to read some of my work. We seem to have similar mindsets.

[Holly]

Thank you :) I will totally check out your work...