I've Heard Them Say

I've Heard Them Say

A Poem by Holly
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I couldn't sleep so i made a poem... PLEASE READ & REVIEW :)

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I've heard them say
Love is peaceful.
Love is kind.
True love truly never dies.
I tell you now that's all a lie.

I've heard them say
Life is good
Life's a blessing
Live your life or you'll regret it
I tell you now I've learned my lesson

Nothing brings peace
No one is kind
True love's not real
It always dies

Life is pain
A twisted curse
So end it now
It just gets worse











© 2014 Holly



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Holly
I'm grateful for any feedback

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at times i might agree, at other times not, at times kindness can spring from the most unexpected place and yes hurt too can spring up and slap us in the face, all is not black and white...

Posted 3 Years Ago


Holly

3 Years Ago

I agree.. The world is full of gray area. Thank you so much for the review :)
This really spoke to me in a way many people cannot. I feel that you and I have the view of things such as this. I'd greatly appreciate if you were to read some of my work. We seem to have similar mindsets.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Holly

3 Years Ago

Thank you :) I will totally check out your work...

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Added on February 25, 2014
Last Updated on February 25, 2014
Tags: love, romance, heartbreak, teen, angst, poem, lies, pain, life, lessons, regret, kind, peace, true love, real

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