my friend mr pain

my friend mr pain

A Poem by hundi
"

this is actually a song . an accident left me messed up ,but im still here spiritually and emotionally. wrote this song about my life now

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my friend, your back again

for another day

did you miss me?

you smother me

why wont you go away?

ill get rid of you - if i only knew

the price i would pay

 

for a way to know, for a way to know

 

you control me, you own me

this friendship needs to end

i scream your name, mr pain

i hate you as a friend

ill get rid of you if i only knew

the price i would pay

 

for a way to know, for a way to know

 

my friend , your back again

for another day

© 2013 hundi


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your unwelcome friend is a friend of everyone some way or the other...the way u tell pain is your friend makes me pity you for you should have undergone a lot of troubles because of your so-called friend...i pray god your friend soon dies away:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


hundi

11 Years Ago

i agree , it is a friend to us all in some way, no more surgeries can fix what happend in the accide.. read more
ganga ramesh

11 Years Ago

you are great in terms of the immense positive thoughts you own and how you turn your pain to joy an.. read more
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Pax
ah... mr. Pain never goes away... he's always there to remind us of the past, present and even the future... we can never escape him, for his part of our nature... to feel pain makes us more human.... capable of mistakes and painful accidents... I'm glad you write it down... for its helps us release something into our words... great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


hundi

11 Years Ago

thank you , one thing about pain , wether physical, emotional, or spiritual, it can make someone app.. read more
oh you call pain a friend.. i guess that is because it is with you daily now... your desperation in wishing for relief is evident .. but I thought you expressed yourself very well ... I pray you find relief !

Posted 11 Years Ago


hundi

11 Years Ago

thank you for "getting it" it is a terrible "friend" i cannot escape from , its makes me happy yo.. read more
Renée

11 Years Ago

it was a pleasure to read your thoughts.. ( :
Renée

11 Years Ago

I wish though... pain was not a part of your life

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