Does he?

Does he?

A Poem by Liz Alexander

His voice is like fire for the heart
May the absense not grown fonder
A peace settled in from where, 
the heart began to race
It now it is a unfamiar feeling,
wanting place my head between my knees
A causal friendship this is
There is no doubt that
He does not know, does he?

© 2016 Liz Alexander



Author's Note

Liz Alexander
A new muse

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I liked the poem and the very nice ending.
"He does not know, does he?"
Woman are filled with mystery. Rarely does a man know what she wants. Nice flow of thoughts led to perfect ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I actually really love this piece! It is short and to the point, but it gets the point across loud and clear. I think that nearly everyone can relate to what you just wrote about, and I think that you put it into perfectly clear words and in a beautiful way as well. There was one or two spelling errors, but those are easily fixed. Keep up the great work!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Liz Alexander

1 Year Ago

Thank you!
I liked the poem and the very nice ending.
"He does not know, does he?"
Woman are filled with mystery. Rarely does a man know what she wants. Nice flow of thoughts led to perfect ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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In College. My major is Missions. Trying to pave my own way I love writing about wonders, romance, and God. more..

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