Love me

I

I lay wake crying softly

Hoping no one will hear

Because they will ask

Why are you crying?

-

I cry because

I have waited for someone

To hold me when I am sad

Hold me when I am cold

When I am mad

Someone to tell me it

Going to tell me it ok

-

I want a boy that will

Love me for me

Love me when I cry

Love me when I make him mad

-

I lie wake wishing for someone

That they would not know

That I need

That I am weak

I need to be strong

-

I in love with a boy that

Is in love with someone else

I want him to hold me

I want him to dry my tears

Author's Note

It one of the first poems I ever wrote. Tell me what you think.
Inspired by: A guy that I had crush on for 4 to 5 years.

Reviews

[Krazy On The Outside]

I really like it but but these lines don't make sence "Someone to tell me
Going to tell me it ok"
Other than that, I didn't see anything else.