I feel like a Monster

I feel like a Monster

A Poem by Coraline Havoc

I hurt my friends...

Standing in the rain all alone...

Being mad at myself...

For what have I become?

Some kind of monster?

What a strange way for me..

To be acting....

Why can't I...

Just...

Stop acting like a monster?

Help me...

Before I fully become...

A scary monster...

I hate what I've become...

I feel so much..

Like a creature who ahs no emotion..

Like a scary nightmare of mine..

The one where I turn into a beast...

With razor sharp teeth...

And I...

KILL...

But I keep only Matt alive....

I'm scared of what I've become...

© 2010 Coraline Havoc


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sounds nice & awesome. it really describes a person. & i really like it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very nice job!!! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The poem is powerful. You wrote with great strength and power in your words. I could feel the anger and desire to defeat the beast. Sometime the beast is needed to keep us safe and sane. A very strong poem. I enjoyed reading your words.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Coraline Havoc
Coraline Havoc

MA, Japan



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Hi! I'm Tatiana! I love to write stories whenever I'm sad or upset. Writing stories is my life. I am 14 years old. Music is my world as well as writing. I am a HUGE Sasuke Uchiha fan! I love LOTS of d.. more..

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