Mesmerizing beauty

Was a hazy and shady dusk twilight,
The mist and fog in sky lit a light,
Gushing o'er the vales oh clouds,
Smite my sorrow, bring me my delight.

Oh immense boulevard of poetic birth,
This heavenly ,shaded and beautified earth,
Recall thy did ,undone heft promise ,
Of feeding my soul thy recreational mirth

In your euphoric soul snatching rain ,
I forget all the dictions of my pain,
Whence yours,thence all else beauty,
I find feeble, meagre and utterly vain.

This silhouette of Gods blended creation,
Picturesque painting of natural Passion,
Acquaints me of thy heart lashing might,
And thy mesmerising hypnoting Fashion

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

I liked the flow and the rhythm of this poem. The words were very well rhymed. Great one.

[M Idrees Bhat]

Thank you! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺

[Elsa Linnet]

Absolutely beautiful. The imagery is vivid and wonderful and the meter and rhyme feel so natural, even though writing in a fully structured form can be difficult. Great poem!

[M Idrees Bhat]

thank you for that piece of compliment :)

[A Scribbler Named Bek]

This is a gorgeous piece :) My only suggestion would be to put it into an actual poem format instead of just one big paragraph. Either way it's still beautiful - great job!

[M Idrees Bhat]

It was just a device mismanipulation. And thank you very much, your review is cherishable . 😊

[A Scribbler Named Bek]

Darn technology. Seriously though, I can't get over how amazing this is. It almost sounds Shakespearean. I especially love the lines in the last stanza, "This silhouette of God's blended creation/Picturesque painting of natural passion" FREAKING BEAUTIFUL!!!!! So yeah. I'll go be excited somewhere else now.

[M Idrees Bhat]

Hahaa... Thank you 😊...