Mmmmm

Mmmmm

A Poem by Im His Daughter

Mmmmm

red, round & smooth

flavored to your liking

sweet sugar to your lips


makes you smile

makes you grin & giggle

as you close your mouth

sweet memories of days gone by


it's something you can never forget

everytime you see one

you want it

it stirs up emotions

 

floods your heart with love

in & out

around & about

open & close


swirling tongue

eyes closed

suddenly pop open with excitement

as you taste the delicious


lip smacking

drool sucking

lollipop

mmmmm







© 2014 Im His Daughter



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Very good description. For a minute. I thought it was strawberry. Your detailed description will make me journey out and buy some now. Nice flow of thoughts leading to a good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Nicely done. Makes me recall summertime in my youth.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Very good description. For a minute. I thought it was strawberry. Your detailed description will make me journey out and buy some now. Nice flow of thoughts leading to a good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 22, 2014
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Im His Daughter
Im His Daughter

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(Sorry I don't read stories, chapters or books. I am not a critic either, I will only read poems. When I comment, I comment only on how it makes me feel. Promise no criticism here unless maybe a word .. more..

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