Black tears.

Keeps searching,
Hoping.
If not this one,
The one still to come.
Heart is rapidly beating,
Constantly grieving.
Eyes flickering,
-Always losing,
Gaining years
And mascara infused tears.

Reviews

[Eleanor]

It short but a rich piece of writing.
The rhyme and flow is great! You explained different emotions in every line.
The pain, sadness, hope everything. Its a beautiful writing. And well people dont understand how much important a tear is. I would definitely love to read more by you :)

[s y e]

I loved this Inda! A magnificent piece.

[jennifer little]

great poem nicely worded nicely said , i enjoyed reading it its short but had great flow to it and very good passion to it keep up the good work keep on writing

[Frontier]

Very true, sadly. I've enjoyed all your short but riveting writes.

[misha]

Wow, such a simple yet strong piece. "And mascara infused tears." Beautiful. Great write!

[Inda]

Thanks guys, glad you liked it!

[Baby Ricochet]

This one is oddly touching. Good one Inda

[AprilRN1210]

wow... you have done it again.. the title, the ending, the meaning, the layers.. the images and emotions in so few words.. that disappointment, the pain, the loss of that dream, struggling to keep a hold on that hope, making yourself continue on through those tears and hurt... that little bit of adrenaline that comes with that hope-maybe this one.. then... back down... this is creatively expressed with just the right amount of imagery, emotion, and intellectual stimulation.. I like the way the imagery of last line ties into the title.. nice!.. one of my new favorites of yours.. I FELT this one..