Stoic

Stoic

A Poem by Inda

It's going to hurt.
after the sunshine
comes the dark.
It will rain many days
and you'll lose.
And there's Death,
no cure for that
 yet.
Still, you'll be fine,
broken smile will be 
shining
 in the end.

© 2017 Inda


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I enjoyed this, the glimmer of hope in the midst of despair. Life is not a straight line but an undulating series of highs and lows. Thank you for sharing this :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Agreed, s**t times are guaranteed but in the end, we will be fine!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really good. It has that sense of realness to it, because there are bad times but it will turn out ok in the end.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

6 Years Ago

thanks glad you enjoyed it and reviewed.
"Broken smile will be shining in the end..."
You've provided hope and happiness to the reader and it really brightened my day and made me smile :)
Well done, keep it up

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

6 Years Ago

Glad i could accomplish that :)
thanks for the RnR
Mr.Writer

6 Years Ago

No problem :)

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Inda
Inda

miami, FL



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