Vintage

Love is like fine wine when it is aged to perfection

 

 

 

Vintage

By jack

 

Careful placed imagination

Sips the fruit of future wine

The vintage of a grand reunion

Comes to both of us in time

 

Patience served is cold in nature

Long awaited happiness

Chilled until it meets perfection

Sealed with but a single kiss

 

Neath a vase of salmon roses

Fragrance comes a wondrous pair

Every slice a form delicious

Pour these dreams we both do share

 

Labeled as a kind illusion

Offering the spirits glow

Take your time and savor slowly

As our love indeed does show

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Constance Payne]

Love is definitely like a fine wine, it must be savored and allowed to breath. Wonderful words that remind me to tell those I love that I love them each day.

[KAOlmsted]

So pretty...did you paint that picture??

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my sweet friend. No, I didn't paint it.

[KAOlmsted]

My pleasure...well...it's still a nice picture ;-)

[InsanityWriter]

Perfectly lovely. :) Great work, as always. ;)

[Jack...]

Thank you my friend.

[Valentine]

The longer the vinter ages his wine..the better it is just like true love..as love grows with the years when it is a true love..Valentine

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[Leigh]

Well measured out quality in this, the last verse is good and ends it nicely

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Emerald Seas]

Loved this, Jack! Felt like old love being rekindled... Sweeter and better the second time around - kind of like high school sweethearts reuniting after decades apart.

[Jack...]

Dear Sera, if you only knew, but then again, maybe you do. Thanks so much

[Emerald Seas]

Hmm... now I am so very curious! ;)

[Shivam Murari]

The fist and last stanza puts up the picture of 'old love' in my mind. Nice piece :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much

[Shivam Murari]

Welcome :)

[Shivam Murari]

Welcome :)

[Shivam Murari]

Welcome :)

[Just Kim]

Love the last stanza the best, This is wonderful

[Jack...]

Thank you for your kind words to me.

[Baby Ricochet]

Beautiful as always. Outstanding sir

[Jack...]

Thanks so much

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is a very romantic piece....and i find it interesting how you brought in cold and chilled and yet even those terms applied to an aging love that keeps getting better.

nicely done.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend. I was just on your page.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a little Twilight Zone moment..i know....i think we were commenting on each other's pieces at exactly the same time...dodododododo.