Blue!

Blue!

A Poem by O. Feelya

Great blue heron lands

 

Not twenty feet from my eyes

 

I am paralyzed

 

© 2013 O. Feelya


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Very beautiful, I like the image it created in my mind.

Posted 11 Years Ago


nice senryu...

gave me a feeling...very peaceful.

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


I take it as that you are in awe of its beauty( paralyzed ). Well penned...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awesome sauce

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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O. Feelya
O. Feelya

Portland, OR



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