pretend

kind of the way i think some days!

 I'm really not good enough,

I wont even try to pretend,
I've hit an ultimate low,
realizing, this is the end

I get smashed into the ground,
The dirt kicked into my face,
I'm coming to my fall,
My memory will be erased

No one could really care,
Or comprehend on what I feel,
Hard to believe that is true,
That whats happening is real

It's like being tossed away,
Not good enough for a single soul,
I'm losing everything I had,
I've got no more control

Insanity strikes me deeply,
Like a plane into the spine,
Destruction enters again,
Deep inside my mind

As I lose all hope and belief,
In everything that made me smile,
Life smacks me right across the face,
Again, this life is not worth while

Reviews

[Michael V]

Good, nice emotion and power...I like..

[Nick Erickson]

It's the little things that make you smile, give you hope and get you through tough times that make life worth living.
You've expressed your feelings very strongly in this piece, the feeling of hopelessness and sadness very porminent. Excellent job.
Just remember, there is a whole lot of living to do, a whole lot of poetry to write - and that's what makes life worth lviing.