Spread My Wings

Spread My Wings

A Poem by jaywolf1738

Soon I'll jump up,
I'll touch the sky,
Spread my wings
and let me fly.
Through the dark
and through the night,
Not scared to fall,
not scared to die.
Bullies think that they can get by,
but they don't know I'll be bringing on the fight.
'Cause there's a warrior rising up tonight...


© 2017 jaywolf1738



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So short but sweet. A really lovely poem. Let me just say how sorry I am that it has taken me so long to read and review this. I love the message and story that this poem tells, as well as, the subtle rhyming. What I mean by that is that there wasn't too much rhyming in the poem that was really in your face to readers, I liked that as I find with some poems I read that the poets are so focused on making it rhyme that the poems story is forgotten about (I am not aiming that at anyone and this is mainly with published poets that I find this happens with). Really lovely poem and with lots of imagery. I loved it and look forward to reading more in the future. I am once again so sorry for taking so long to read this, do not take this personally I have just had to take a little break to get my grades up, but I am back now. Anyway, thank you so much for writing a poem with such a beautiful message.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I love these lines, "Through the dark
and through the night,
Not scared to fall,
not scared to die."
This piece tells a sad, yet happy story at the same time.
Beautifully worded.
Just like the friend you are to me.
Beautiful.
As always, keep writing, and I'll always read.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So short but sweet. A really lovely poem. Let me just say how sorry I am that it has taken me so long to read and review this. I love the message and story that this poem tells, as well as, the subtle rhyming. What I mean by that is that there wasn't too much rhyming in the poem that was really in your face to readers, I liked that as I find with some poems I read that the poets are so focused on making it rhyme that the poems story is forgotten about (I am not aiming that at anyone and this is mainly with published poets that I find this happens with). Really lovely poem and with lots of imagery. I loved it and look forward to reading more in the future. I am once again so sorry for taking so long to read this, do not take this personally I have just had to take a little break to get my grades up, but I am back now. Anyway, thank you so much for writing a poem with such a beautiful message.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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16, very athletic, pirate pride, daydreamer, singer, love to draw, want to travel the world someday more..

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