Summertime

Summertime

A Poem by ajasminewallflower
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Even if summer has just begun, I can't help but feel like this is going to go down in history

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Summertime
 
This summer, right now
Nothing more, nothing less
Freedom is filling my spirit
We’ve paid our school time dues
Now sweet liberty is ours
 
This summer, unexpected
Endings mean new beginnings
Longer days, even longer nights
That just means more time
For us to come alive
 
This summer, enticing and exciting
Nothing to do, sleeping in
But everything to see
Beach bonfires and sunsets
Painted on the sea’s surface
 
This summer, you and I
Hand in Hand, Smiles all around
My head on your shoulders
Looking up into the night sky
Feeling a feeling unknown
 
This summer let the times fly
This high that’s unbelievable
Everything’s wrong but so right
Somehow things are all right
Even if it’s just for tonight
 
This summer, nothing will ever compare
Never will it be matched
Never will it be forgotten
But now we can always remember
All these memories shared

© 2009 ajasminewallflower


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Summertime indeed! I think all summers are epic in a way...even if your summer was hanging in your mother's basement playing video games and watching I Love Lucy reruns! Summer is special. Of course, our summers are spent having wonderful adventures and making unforgettable memories, as you said. I really loved this, not only because it was good, but because it brought up old summer memories. It sucks that you and I have never spent a summer together, but we manage anyway, don't we bestie? I think your first stanza summed it all up:

"This summer, right now
Nothing more, nothing less
Freedom is filling my spirit
We've paid our school time dues
Now sweet liberty is ours"

Schooltime dues.....gag me with a spoon. Ms Blanketship (*giggle*) will have a whole new set of kids to torture next year! Haha. Anyways hun, loved this, love you, love SUMMER

Posted 14 Years Ago



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ajasminewallflower
ajasminewallflower

Hollister, CA



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Hey everyone! My name is Jazmine and this is my life in metaphors and beautiful words. You guys probably remember me as Jazmataz. Well, I'm haven't been on here for almost two years and after a.. more..

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