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A Poem by Joshua McNay

Wrote a little thing when I was trying to sleep. Nothing fancy just some words.

© 2017 Joshua McNay

Author's Note

Review if you like, thoughts and opinions are always welcome. As always thank you for reading.

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Relic

We've all become addicted to the screen in front of us which probably doesn't help are eyes much. Reading at night when sleep evades is always enjoyable if you're comfortable.

Liked this.

Posted 6 Years Ago

Karmee

Very creative, and really enjoyable. I like this piece

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

Thank you I am happy to hear you liked it. Thank you for the review.

Damien Ridge

Nice little poem that fits today's society very well. A lot of people can connect with it! Thanks for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

6 Years Ago

Thank you! I am happy to hear you liked it. Thanks for reading!

emipoemi

This is a fun read! Profound even in some places, particularly at the end, where the story is kind of open-ended, left to interpretation. Quite enjoyed the story, the musicality, the imagery. All well-crafted! Well done

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

6 Years Ago

I am happy to hear you like my fun little poem. Didn't think it was profound but glad to hear someon.. read more

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Added on July 1, 2017
Last Updated on July 1, 2017

Author

Joshua McNay

Grand Junction, CO

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I write about a Little Red Fox, I hope you enjoy his adventures as much as I do! Thanks for stopping by and as always thank you for reading! Featuring art by Emily Chan, be sure to check her work o.. more..