Love - A Haiku

A Poem by Joshua McNay

Wrote this little thing for a contest. Never written a haiku so who knows how this even is. Hope you like it!

© 2017 Joshua McNay

Author's Note

Review if you like, this genre is totally new as this is my first hopefully I am not the worst. Thanks for reading!

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lightsong

Oh no! never say the word worse! Your poem is lovely and has a certain warmth, that warmth that comes from the sweet memories even if it's all over and gone...

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Posted 6 Years Ago

Najam Us Saher

There are 5 7 5 syllables in a haiku.
The first line has 4 next line 7 but the last line has only 3
I still think of you
Your memories make me smile
And I still love you
By above changes it will be a perfect haiku.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 6 Years Ago

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6 Years Ago

Yeah, it sounds good.

6 Years Ago

Thanks for the input, I went the original suggestion. I appreciate you helping me make it an actual .. read more

6 Years Ago

You are most welcome :)

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Added on October 23, 2017
Last Updated on October 26, 2017

Author

Joshua McNay

Grand Junction, CO

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I write about a Little Red Fox, I hope you enjoy his adventures as much as I do! Thanks for stopping by and as always thank you for reading! Featuring art by Emily Chan, be sure to check her work o.. more..