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~~~ sinusoidally embraced ~~~


A Poem by jeRRy.whaLLey

Warning
This story is rated Mature and may contain material unsuitable for readers under 18.

dreaming
               formless
as foam touches wave
rolling, reaching, merging ~~~

connecting, feeling, giving way
to hungers ache, hips that sway
a guttural, panting, licking bite
a kissing, clawing, ravishing fight

 we sigh, mad in gyration
our fluids mingle, in tessellation
eyes reflect that hunting look
the giver, the taker and the forsook
intercourse of sweat and moan
a yogic yoni and magic bone
together inhaled, a bated breath
we linger spent, in ego death

so we reap an acquiescence
a repast, over-flowed by senses
to sleep, perhaps to fondly dream
of each, our taste, and all we seem
to think no more of things we miss
to linger long, in this, deep kiss

dreaming
              spinning
                    under Moon
in waves of ocean, sound and light ~~~
 


© 2008 jeRRy.whaLLey



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Such a beautifully erotic poem, very well done: bare and blatant without being vulgar. What is idealized sex but a mingling, tessellation? I wondered if you meant to overlay the meaning of the poem with Hamlet's almost suicidal "to be or not to be" soliloquy by paraphrasing "to sleep, perchance to dream", which gives the whole poem a weighted, longing feeling. Is it love lost and mourned, love currently enjoyed, or love looked forward to and idealized? It could be interpreted in any of these ways. Altogether well done as always. - Mimi.

Posted 1 Year Ago

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