By your side

This piece was created with the intent to be able to ease loneliness...

3 AM, a girl walks in the middle of the road

By her side I try to lighten the load

I call out to her but she hears me not

Her crying heart drowns me out

She lashes out and strikes the wall

 She is in pain and hears not my call

Tears on her cheeks leaving briny traces
Her spirit breaks denied embraces

Even as the darkness gives way to light

Still my presence elude her sight

Now brightly the light shines

I am swallowed by shadow lines

In the distance disaster comes at a speed
I reach out and pull and finally succeed

She cries as she can finally see my face

To her I say "Your side will be forever my place"

Author's Note

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Tasfia17/1443652/ this is the poem that inspired me to create this piece. A poem by Annabelle Alexendria if you liked this poem i encourage you to read her piece as well

Reviews

[Lenah Mehzabin]

YOu guys really nailed it ! '' Am I so alone '' & your " By Your side " .. I must say thousands of loners everyday feels like this but all they need is someone by their side .. a company can change a life and make it feel worth living when loneliness kills like it doesn't matter.. amazing poetry !
Thumbs up :)

[Cool Girl]

I seriously didnt reveiw this already?!? Well then...
Triple thumbs up for this one! Great job!

[sonnie ibadah]

touching piece. i wish reality had such an ending...but to some of us lonliness is a loyal friend that's always by our side.

[Aayushi]

A beautiful poem with a beautiful ending. Thanks for sharing.

[Valentine]

This is a lovely sensitive write. Well written. Valentine

[maria ( rose)]

She cries as she can finally see my face
To her I say "Your side will be forever my place"
Simply breathtaking! Beautiful.thank you for sharing:)
mariarose♥

[Sami Khalil]

Inspired and inspiring at the same time. Bravo.......................

[jemaral]

Im glad you enjoyed it...

[Sami Khalil]

Yep...:)..........

[Tasfia Islam]

I'm speechless.... Its a wonderful response.. :) Massive pain kills her so much that she couldn't realize his presence beside her. He was always there by her side but she felt like no one cares... Pain and agony kills someone so much that they fail to see every little thing that might make the pain a bit lesser....

You wonderfully expressed it through this poem.... :) Thank you for sharing the poem... :)

[jemaral]

Im honored that you think so... Though It should be me who should be thanking you.. to be honest Ive been stuck in my writing lately.. and reading your work gave the jolt of inspiration i needed to get myself out of it..

[Tasfia Islam]

My pleasure... :)