let me tell you the ways...

let me tell you the ways...

A Poem by she makes me weird
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ms. jenacini inspires me...

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i love you for who you are

i love you for the good and the bad...

if there's any bad at all

i love you in a way i don't understand

i'm intrigued by the way i fell for you with such intensity

you love me in return-

in a different kind of way

you know i'm in love with you

and you're okay

you don't push me away

or condemn me

you say i'm sweet

you say i make you feel so amazing

well, you give me wings

you give me butterflies

you give me goosebumps and smiles

please just stay for a while

know my love is pure and innocent

like your beauty...

your intelligence, your strong will and determination...

i look in your eyes

seeing my reflection off your unblemished soul

you visit me in my dreams

and smile

you are simply you...

the one i love

© 2008 she makes me weird


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So lovely and written with an open heart..no fear in this love..beautiful

Posted 15 Years Ago


There is something so nice in love poems that make the subject 'real' and not just an abstract fantasy. I read 'let me tell you the ways...' and the portrait of this lady that has captured your heart is painted for the world to see. Something she can look at and see herself in, and smile. Sincere, true, even with the smudges that came off your brush where you didn't want them as you did your best to get the colors just right.
This was lovely to read. Sincerely! Thanks for sharing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


that was truly beautiful. that's all i have2 say.

Posted 15 Years Ago


i love you in a way i don't understand
i'm intrigued by the way i fell for you with such intensity

Boy, do I get that! I so understand this poem! Beautifully written...you seem to have a very unique way of capturing the very heart of what you are writing about and projecting it so perfectly, letting the rest of us common folk understand it exactly! ;) Good job!


Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on April 22, 2008
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she makes me weird

the big one, TX



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I am simply me. I love life for the good and the bad. I write what I feel. So many aspects of life to be unturned and yet a little box to write about me... more..

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