For Love

Here before you I stand;

Opening up, putting my heart within your hand.

I look to you for joy and guidance;

You give it to me full, without a sideways glance.

I see within you who I want to be;

And you, in turn, see me, truly me.

I cannot tell how much I love you;

For no words will ever ring true.

I long to tell you all that I feel;

I want to  live forever in those eyes of steel.

Just one touch and I melt within your arms;

Completely subdued by your loving and gentle charms.

No matter how far I fall;

I know your there to help me through it all.

From the night and through the day;

'Come what will,' I say.

For you are my life and love;

Our time together as pure as the whitest dove.

I feel you in the dark, caressing my fears away;

Gently turning my night into day.

Through all my trials and toils;

I found a love that never spoils.

You are my one and true;

I'll always want to do right by you.

Though these words are simple;

They are just a ripple;

Upon a ponds glassy top;

Of a love that will never stop.

 

Reviews

[HalfBloodPrincess]

Very beautiful, it's sounds so real, it's everything people in love should say to eachother.

[Winter McPherson]

Sweet, romantic and filled with devotion. Flows so nicely with a perfect rythmic cadence. Sounds like a love we all long for. I hope for you it is a certain reality. Thanks for penning these charming words.

[Marina]

Amazing,
Really good job.

Keep writing!

[shinybluestars03]

Beautifully written poem Wolf,
very romantic as well.

"I want to live forever in those eyes of steel.
Just one touch and I melt within your arms;..."
those were my favorite lines.
Hope to keep reading more of your work
Thanks for sharing

Best wishes