Soul for hire

This one kind of feels unfinished, please I am open to any new ideas.

Soul for rent or hire

looking for a buyer

blinded by the emptiness

that she finds inside her

she drifts through space

trying to find her place

and she can't come down

until she has found

the road to free...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice opening for a poem of discovery and journey. The words solid and interesting. Thank you Jesse for sharing your words and your thoughts.
Coyote