The Rain

The Rain

A Story by jibin55

It was a sunny day, the sun beat hard on the parched earth, its children saved from the sun s wrath by the roofs they had made. Suddenly upon the horizon a distant rumble was heard it seemed like a lion marking its territory . and 'they' came in packs like dogs hunting its prey, overpowering and dominating the sky .the blue put up little fight but was soon strangled .  He had arrived . the nature as if to respect its new lord had stopped moving , waiting in anticipation for her lords orders.the lord assumed his throne.  but then a battle cry was heard the king was being opposed by his own, his robe was being torn by shards of lightening but the king seemed composed, slowly he waved his hand and showered tiny pearls of water, each pearl with an identity of its own, it was a parting gift for his beloved before he went for his battle .The people held out their hands to catch these pearls but they could only get some they were not worth it  it was meant for his bride , as each drop fell , the earth showed off her true beauty as each drop adorned her body ,decorating it she put on her best perfume alluring all around her, with a prayer on her lips she waited for her love suddenly the whole of black was melting the king was losing the battle he had been stabbed by ray of sunlight, his bride watched as her king fell to the ground .the blue, danced in jubilation as it saw its victory ,but the king was graceful in his defeat as he joined his mate, a pristine bond was forged. but the people could not comprehend what had happened and went back to the mundane the sky turned blue and a seedling that had just sprouted sang of the king who though had lost but had won.

© 2013 jibin55


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jibin55
ignore grammar how is the imagery

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i loved your imagery...

i think it's amazing to see how you flowed so effortlessly from describing parched natural surroundings, to describing an epic chase, to describing an epic ending, and finally to describe nature as something so beautiful (like a gorgeous woman)...

Posted 10 Years Ago


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jibin55

10 Years Ago

thnks buddy
Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)

10 Years Ago

no problem!



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i loved your imagery...

i think it's amazing to see how you flowed so effortlessly from describing parched natural surroundings, to describing an epic chase, to describing an epic ending, and finally to describe nature as something so beautiful (like a gorgeous woman)...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jibin55

10 Years Ago

thnks buddy
Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)

10 Years Ago

no problem!
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Really nice :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great imagery buddy, innovative

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jibin55

10 Years Ago

macha :)
it IS good !!
keep up..

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jibin55

10 Years Ago

thnk u
Good Loved it :)

Just keep posting such innovative thoughts :)

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2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

jibin55

10 Years Ago

thnks means a lot
Vikrantsingh

10 Years Ago

No worries m/

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thiruvananthapuram, kerala, India



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i am an average indian teenager who is influenced by the changes around me and would like to put my feelings about them on paper more..

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