A Measure of your Mind

A Measure of your Mind

A Poem by jinjahman
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Tricks of the mind

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I poured a measure of your mind
into a glass full of ice and watched 
as it made from it sweet wine;
but not for my mind!

I glanced left and right crossing 
the bridge to your heart; I was caught 
by a briar that spat secateurs at me;
but not for my heart, no!

I shared a dance with you on a roof 
made from promises; I fell to the ground 
amidst the admirers gathered to see you;
but not to see my mono-dance!

I drew a line and wrote it down and 
pinched some salt and licked a wound
and sat up and listened..

It was my mind and heart 
both dancing to the sound
of far distant stanzas   
aching on a plain empty page.

© 2010 jinjahman



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Very charming write filled with desire. Loved it!

Posted 2 Years Ago


I love so much about your poetry J-man, but this is really a stand-out piece for me, filled with passion and longing, and the wry knowledge that these emotions are the hardest to set down on paper.

Posted 2 Years Ago



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jinjahman
jinjahman

Ireland



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I've written songs and poems since basic maturity emerged from youth. I'm driven by reminiscence and reflection, youthful endeavours and changing realities of life. I try to explore the lexicon of th.. more..

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