New Beginings

Well, I new chapter of my life has opened up and I needed to write about it. I really don't feel that this is my best work, but can you blame me? My heads all full of the fluff, and my stomach with the butterflies! I can't think straight!!

I fall down from grace again
You watch my decent with watery eyes
I crumple to the floor
You try to help my rise

You watch my decent with watery eyes
I don’t notice your concern
You try to help me rise
I collect myself and stand alone

I don’t notice your concern
You never fail to care for me
I collect myself and stand alone
You’ll help me even if I don’t see

You never fail to care for me
I start to take the hint
You’ll help me even if I don’t see
Can this be for real?

I start to take the hint
You’re not as quiet now
Can this be for real?
I must know why and how!

You’re not as quiet now
You show me your affection
I must know why and how!
You’ll prove it to me soon

You show me your affection
I warm up to your embrace
You’ll prove it to me soon
With a smile on your face

I warm up to your embrace
I tell you that I care
With a smile on your face
Your reply was expected

I tell you that I care
You tell me so do you
Your reply was expected
So my suspicions were true

You tell me so do you
You want to be with me
So my suspicions were true
And we’ll be happy as can be!

<3

Author's Note

This is made of fail, but inspired by win. o__o;;

Reviews

[Jade Mayhew]

Again, insanely adorable. And again, your author's note made me giggly. :] I liked this one; I think I liked the other one a bit more, but I liked this one a whole lot too. I loved the way you took the second line from each verse and made it the first line of the next verse. Very very creative; I've never thought to do that. Thanks so much for sharing!

~Jade Mayhew.

[Eric Cox]

Cool poem. I don't think it's a fail either.

[Donovan "Grey Wolf" Go..]

I love it its not a fail its awsome u should read this in poetry club or in our creative writing class it is beautiful i feel so awsome reading it so u knew before i asked u

[Kate Green]

wow this is really good :)
i wish i could write poetry :)