playing with my heart

what else shall I say nothing will ever be the same

I want to let you go, but I keep letting my fears show
wondering whats wrong with me, we used to be ONE
because anything is better than TWO be alone
I can't hold on to you anymore, I have to break free
beneath this sliver moon, but baby I'm lonely
you where my whole world, only you were my baby love, you made my sun come up
now it's gonna be dark forever...
You never seem to be wrong and I'm never right

Author's Note

oh I just edited this.

Reviews

[Jeff]

The feeling in it is what matters. The emotions come out very well.

[Ashley]

not all poems rhyme

[bwmorency]

Hm, I didn't really see the flow and there is no rhyming. Keep on writing to get better, though!

[Kon™]

Ah, that feeling is something that's hard to get over, and you described it though this poem very nicely. Again, the grammar errors are there, but besides that, it's a decent poem ;P

[Moth Phoenix]

awwww =[
I know the whole feeling so does my bestie.
Great poem and I love the Gir picture!!!! ^_^