Time doesnt make my heart heal

about people you love who passed on and how you cant let go

When you screamed id wipe away all of your fears
i have been all alone since you left
how is Heaven?
im so tired of being here, with all of my innocent fears
these old cuts wont seem to heal
when you cried id wipe away all of your tears
your presents is still here
im bound by the life you left behind
this pain is just too deep
there is too much here
why are you really gone?
since im not dead, well.. yet.
i linger alone in the light of the dark moon
you promised you'd be around
we used to go into town
your long gone
but you promised you live with me forever
i wish i could see you once again
i would of gave my soul to save you
they knew, while i was all wrong
what was going on?
i still keep you locked in my heart
we will never be apart
i cant forget you
you visit me in my dreams, you weren't sick with
cancer
anymore..
why couldn't you stay though? you had to go away?
why am i here, and you and not near?
time cant heal my wounds

Author's Note

do you feel the same?

Reviews

[Kon™]

I really like this piece because it felt truthful and touching. I do think many people can relate to this because there are many deaths that are so sudden and it's hard to let go. I think almost everyone's experienced something like this. And at times, I felt like I heard some of Evanescence's My Immortal song lyrics here XD, I don't know, it's just this poem gave me the same feeling that song did :P. Aside, from grammar errors, I think this is a great poem :)

[bwmorency]

Most of these poems lack the smooth writing nonetheless I get where you are coming from. Try adding more flow next time.

[Ashley]

Yes i got some inspiration from that song, because it reminds me of how many people close to me had passed away.