not quite the hero

not quite the hero

A Poem by joshua deathdealer
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06/2013

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This journey through the worlds of my soul
transitions me from the darkness to the light
though I've recognized this too to be a cycle 

Long walks nowhere around the growing dead
casually reminds me that I am still alive
although I'm the only one left standing still

I feel superhuman but not quite the hero

© 2014 joshua deathdealer


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Powerful Josh...

I know you've been there, and I've seen you growing, and turning to the light,
as through the years, I've read you, watched you, talked with you, and there are times, it strongly is turning back, as that circle, but inside of you rests a powerful strong person, that simply shall battle with both... you will forever, it's you.. and it's beautiful :D

I'm in fond of your last line, it shows, how steady you are, without getting overwhelmed by one side...
Clever, and on point dear one. You balance well.

- Elisa

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

joshua deathdealer

9 Years Ago

Thank you. Your right on and your words are much appreciated. Much. Ho visto e imparato attraverso l.. read more

9 Years Ago

Non hai idea quanto questo significa per me.... tu sei importante mio amico profondo... grazie tesor.. read more



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Powerful Josh...

I know you've been there, and I've seen you growing, and turning to the light,
as through the years, I've read you, watched you, talked with you, and there are times, it strongly is turning back, as that circle, but inside of you rests a powerful strong person, that simply shall battle with both... you will forever, it's you.. and it's beautiful :D

I'm in fond of your last line, it shows, how steady you are, without getting overwhelmed by one side...
Clever, and on point dear one. You balance well.

- Elisa

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

joshua deathdealer

9 Years Ago

Thank you. Your right on and your words are much appreciated. Much. Ho visto e imparato attraverso l.. read more

9 Years Ago

Non hai idea quanto questo significa per me.... tu sei importante mio amico profondo... grazie tesor.. read more
Thought-provoking this one is...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really loved this poem. You always have a good flow to all your poems. And the last line stuck out to me the most. If you were a superhuman that would be pretty cool. Thank you for sharing yet another beautiful piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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joshua deathdealer

Casket City, FL



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"My trepidation of things past is not a song with a beginning, middle and end. But an endless symphony playing infinite variations on the same theme. One day of sadness fades into another and the .. more..

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